Turkish delight - Presentation feedback

SUMMER BRIEF / TURKISH DELIGHT
PRESENTATION FEEDBACK

POWERPOINT PRESENTATION.

Due to the 3-5 minute time limit on the presentation, I could not include too much of my research. Because of this i only added the information that i thought would interest and surprise the others in the group as well as taking what I had the most fun doing. I made sure I presented a good balance of Primary and secondary research as well as showing research the related my subject to Graphic design and proposing how I could go further with this research.



COMMENTS LEFT ON THE POSTET NOTES FROM THE GROUP.

1.
- Varied initial ideas and narrowed down for good reasons.
- Good visuals
- Love the overall aesthetic of presentation
- Very extensive knowledge of the subject, clear interest and lots of research.


2.
- Good knowledge of Turkish Delight.
- Plenty of primary research.
- Really clear presentation and well photographed.
- Look further in to the packaging and Branding.


3.
- Fascinating subject, didn't realise that there was such a history toward Turkish delight.
- Interesting that you have visited the factory to broaden your knowledge.


4.
- Good primary research.
- Good overall knowledge.
- Passionate about topic.


5.
- Good knowledge behind your subject, visiting a turkish delight factory (good research)


6.
- Good knowledge on subject.
- Great primary research / visiting factory.
- Clear pictures, sounded interested in subject.


7.
- Lots of detail, learnt new things about the topic.
- Good variety of research.


8.
- Great research!
- You really made a good effort getting out there.



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PROPOSED PLANS FOR FURTHER RESEARCH.

- Look into Branding and Identity.
I feel that looking deeper in to the branding and identity of similar confectionary products will help me steer my research it to a more Graphic design related subject. 
I want to look at successful/popular confectionary brands and try to understand how they have become a staple in this large market.

- Look into Product and Packaging.
Researching further into packaging regarding similar confectionary products would also help me to specify my research to Graphic design. I can look at how different types of confectionary is packaged while relating that to my original turkish Delight product. Looking at existing packaging will help me to understand why these products are packaged in this way and what effect this also has on how much is purchased by the consumer.